

Edit of the World of Sopho and Dead Star
Brought in a new editor today for a co-editing stream. Here's a quick highlight of the insights with more after: Give context early...


Edit of Ozma and Stuck in Silence
Just wrapped up a late night edit of Ozma and Stuck in Silence. I've written a few takeaways below, and as always, if you'd like to get...


Understanding Polyphony in Writing in Visit from the Goon Squad
Hey all, Here's a paper I wrote on how to use the contrast and concert of the different voices of a novel (character / authorial / etc.)...


Using interiority to express a character's thoughts
As someone who started as a screenwriter, getting into a character's head has always been a bit of a challenge for me since I switched to...


Children's book and short story edits
Well, last night we dug into an awesome piece of children's fiction and a fun speculative short story. I wanted to share a few of the...


Learn how to develop resonant characters with this Final Boss Tutorial!
This is our first of a series of tutorials on developing stories. Tonight we talked about developing resonant characters using the...
I wanted to share an example of a paid edit
One of the awesome writers I've worked with gave me permission to use the notes I wrote up for her screenplay an an example of my paid...


We Edited Demon Priestess and ProLOGue
Tonight we took a look at a few stories that play in the fantastical realm. I have our video review and line-by-line notes posted below,...


Editing the novel "The Life Interstellar"
The last human child on a water mining outpost is raised by a spider and uncovers the colony's dark secret. We took a look at the first...


Editing "I Shall be Released" and "42 Days"
In a late night editing session, we took a look at a script from one of our awesome Twitch contributors, Gregory Mandarano...