October 26, 2019

Hey all,

Just wrapped up a new CYOA game for Fable labs. If you have an iPhone, I'd love if you all gave it a play (and of course shared feedback). Of course, this game is in beta so the art and the characters aren't final, but be part of the development process and hav...

September 27, 2019

Working as an editor, I’ve read a LOT of amateur fiction and given lots of advice to aspiring writers. Over time, patterns start to emerge, and one of the most common issues sounds like the most obvious question in the world.

What the heck are you supposed to write?

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December 23, 2018

We've all written and read "Talking Wallpaper" dialogue. It mimics the chit-chat of every day conversation. 

"Hi there," Steve said.

"How's it going?" Bob replied.

"Oh, it's all right." 

Does this dialogue sound realistic? Yes. But is it enthralling, engaging, or rive...

December 18, 2018

Radio drama is one of the lost art forms, and well produced radio dramas are as hard to find as truffles (I've been watching a lot of cooking shows). So, in true final boss editing style, a few of our fellow editors and myself decided to write and produce the first epi...

December 11, 2018

It's been a while since we've done an edit, so it was high time! Both of the stories we read tonight were awesome, but both had some opportunities to develop conflict. Here are some of the warning signs of a scene that needs a little extra conflict and some options on...

July 20, 2018

After editing hundreds of stories, this remains one of the biggest challenges in prose that I see.  How to engage a reader through the scene from page one.  So often in speculative fiction (and even literary fiction) the first scene doesn't accomplish all the writer ne...

March 11, 2018

Just wrapped up a fun scriptshadow edit with the Fox and enjoyed two awesome stories from some amateur writers.  

Let's talk a little about what we learned tonight!  

1.) SIMPLE!  Keep your stories simple.  Flare and flash are fun, but they distract from y...

January 31, 2018

Ever have trouble setting up a world for your novel?  Wonder why people fall asleep during your prologues?  Well, this quick podcast on worldbuilding might be for you! 

Embark with us, fellow fantasy and sci-fi writers, on a journey through the perils of...

April 21, 2017

Just wrapped a quick edit with Dan Boss.  We talked about developing POV in stories, balancing interiority for characters, and we drank some whiskey.  I am quite sleepy, so won't expand too much here, but enjoy the video!

January 28, 2017

Brought in a new editor today for a co-editing stream.  Here's a quick highlight of the insights with more after: 

  • Give context early around motivations.  Use a character's interior thoughts during the scene to establish their motivations and context.  Too litt...

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