Edited Scriptshadow's amateur offerings Notorious and Helldorado
Just wrapped up a fun scriptshadow edit with the Fox and enjoyed two awesome stories from some amateur writers. Let's talk a little about what we learned tonight! 1.) SIMPLE! Keep your stories simple. Flare and flash are fun, but they distract from your story. Make sure your story is solid first, and then only add style if it adds to your story! 2.) Avoid verbal doubling. If you've said it once, that's enough! Trust your readers, they'll remember, and if you're going to
