
Edit of the World of Sopho and Dead Star
Brought in a new editor today for a co-editing stream. Here's a quick highlight of the insights with more after: Give context early around motivations. Use a character's interior thoughts during the scene to establish their motivations and context. Too little information about motivations can undermine your narrative. In Screenplays, beware too many HIGHLIGHT CAPS. Treat these like parentheticals--use sparingly. Sometimes the writer can give too LITTLE exposition, beware