We Edited Demon Priestess and ProLOGue
Tonight we took a look at a few stories that play in the fantastical realm. I have our video review and line-by-line notes posted below, but I wanted to share a few overall takeaways I learned from the edit here: When introducing a character, show their public life (how they behave at work etc.), their private life (how they behave with their spouse or close friends), and their personal life (what they do when they're alone). Make every scene (even the setup ones) drive towa
